What I was told from the people that read my essay, they said it was confusing and hard to follow. Sadly, this is something I hear very often. When I write my essays, especially my rough draft, I do a lot of thinking, and I write when I think. However, I try to cram so many different ideas in at once, that I loose track at where I am. And yes, I know this isn’t necessarily a bad thing, but it can be very tedious to condense all these ideas down. Granted, eventually I will have to, but it’s more difficult when I write whatever I feel like all at once. However, what I tried to do differently this time was to display my ideas as much as I could, and relate them to my text. This was what I struggled with the first time I did my essay. It’s defiantly the missing piece to a perfect essay, and I have my fingers crossed that I managed to figure it out this time. Me peer-reviewers haven’t said anything, so I feel confident right now. They have also told me that I display good ideas, it’s just a matter of putting it together in a nice, organized, following, essay.
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